FINAL EDITS FOR The Vital Force – May 2007 Issue

PAGE 2 – TABLE OF CONTENTS

1. Please put all the page numbers flush-right, and run a very fine line of GREY dots from after the content listing over to its page number. Like this:

Service …………………………………………………………………… 3-5

2.Please use THIS version of the table of contents – it has one addition and one change.

Table of Contents

Justin Stone 1

Service 3-5

Guiding Thoughts/Sr. Antonia 6

Pam Says/Sandy Says 7

Events 8-9

Justin Stone 10-11

Teaching Tips 12-13

In the News 14-15

Feature: Science and the Spiritual Life 16

Students 17

Conference 2007 18-19

Karmic Comments & Lighter Side 20

Calendar 22

Pyramid Poetry 23

Contacts/Subscribe 24

PAGE 7 – Remove the number “4” from above the opening-letter W.

PAGE 8 – There’s a typo at the end of the first column.Separate the words so that the column ends with the word “each” and the top line of the next column begins with “other”

PAGE 11 – In grey box, correct the abbreviation for pages, to pp. 22-23,

PAGE 13 – The correct form of this term (T’an T’ien) is with both words capitalized, and an apostrophe after each of the initial T’s.

PAGE 14 – TCC Finance 101 (article):(1) 5th line down:There should be a space between the comma after ‘was’ and the quotation marks; (2) the word ‘kidding’ should run all on one line so there’s not a hyphenated word immediately followed by a dash.

PAGE 18 – (1) First line in text: ‘At the August 9-12, 2007…’:the dates should be separated by a hyphen (as they are here), rather than a dash and spaces; (2) second line:dash rather than hyphen.

PAGE 19 – New text for the box (it replaces the current text):

From Heightened Awareness by Justin Stone, pp. 75-76, © 1988. Available from Good Karma Publishing.

PAGE 20 – Please change second heading to: From Good Karma Publishing (and keep the current font and color you have). [For IRS/tax reasons, we have to make it clear that Good Karma Publishing is a separate entity from The Vital Force.]

PAGE 21 – (1) Column 1, paragraph 5:Text should read:

Jersey, on page 18, on the registration form inside this news-

(2) Column 2 – Correct form of this term in T’an T’ien

PAGE 23 –(1) On the middle pyramid poem: Delete comma after author’s name and delete “student of Donna McElhose, IL” (since she’s already ID’d after first poem).

(2) Last paragraph:delete the word “it”